Wednesday, March 2, 2011

If I Could Fly....

W.A.L.T
o Use a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence
o Use a full stop at the end of a sentence
o Use adjectives in our writing

Has Malia remembered the Learning Intention? How many adjectives can you find in her writing?

If I had wings and could fly, I’d fly to Scotland and fly over the blue sparkling water.
I would fly over the beautiful flowers and see the yellow castles!
By Malia

5 comments:

  1. Great writing Malia, keep up the great work!!

    Sheryl Tomas

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  2. Lots of great words in your story Malia.
    Vannessa Schedewy

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  3. Makes me want to go to Scotland!!

    Warwick Tomas

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  4. I found 4 adjectives, Malia. You were able to paint a lovely picture with your words.
    Mrs Duffin

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  5. I love your class photo - what a gorgeous looking class you are.Hope you've had helpful hands this week
    Mrs Chambers

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